Single Pink Peony
It was chilly and rainy during our entire trip, but the weather actually made it fun to take pictures. I love the water drops on this peony's petals. This flower is begging for a haiku.
posted by Troy at 8:38 AM
4 Comments:
petal pink,
your skin
my tears
magnify
pain
beauty
love?
David ,this is just very beautiful! You are the currently in the lead for best pink peony haiku! Congratluations!
Lovely Pink Peony
Glistening in the chilly rain
Spring's Beauty Eternal
(David did not use correct haiku format 5-7-5)
Sorry David. You have been snaked. Anon is right about format. However, I might place yours first in the "high school girl who shows great promise as a poet" category. And your imagery does capture the beautiful pain of that little peony.
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