Tuesday, June 07, 2005

Single Pink Peony


Peony
Originally uploaded by Troy Smythe.
It was chilly and rainy during our entire trip, but the weather actually made it fun to take pictures. I love the water drops on this peony's petals. This flower is begging for a haiku.


4 Comments:

Anonymous David said...

petal pink,
your skin
my tears
magnify
pain
beauty
love?

9:11 AM  
Blogger Troy said...

David ,this is just very beautiful! You are the currently in the lead for best pink peony haiku! Congratluations!

3:40 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Lovely Pink Peony
Glistening in the chilly rain
Spring's Beauty Eternal
(David did not use correct haiku format 5-7-5)

2:56 PM  
Blogger Troy said...

Sorry David. You have been snaked. Anon is right about format. However, I might place yours first in the "high school girl who shows great promise as a poet" category. And your imagery does capture the beautiful pain of that little peony.

7:30 AM  

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